I would work on the phrasing a bit but other than that it's really sweet. I've been working on #4 off and on for some time but with the octave displacements necessary for 6 string bass I always feel like it's missing something. Can't wait to get me one of them basses like yours 

Makes it easy to remember, no? I'd love to go back to the french way (it's actually Jean-Andre) and I've tried a few times, but it's too much of a hassle to explain all the time.
