Im applying to two different colleges, one is a BA in commercial modern music, and the other is a BA in jazz performance. (The jazz performance is the preferred and the other is a backup choice). For both Id have to do a performance at the interview so Im trying to work on a couple songs that would show off my skills. I've been working on a version of Stevie Wonders Isn't She Lovely in the time I've had the past couple days and would really love if I could get some honest critical opinions on it, stuff that's been done right, stuff that's been done wrong, stuff that needs improvement. Any help is greatly appreciated 
www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qYH5hg8kj0 is the link to the video
www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qYH5hg8kj0 is the link to the video
