Critique my playing

[JSPbassplayer]

Saw a similar thread earlier was hoping to get some ideas on how to improve my playing you can find the songs at
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Thanks in advance for all your thoughts!

Edit link fixed

 

[Buzz E]

Link no worky.

 

[JSPbassplayer]

Link is now fixed

 

[Whousedtoplay]

This thread has NOTHING TO DO WITH BASS TECHNIQUE.
You should post your music in the Recordings Forum.

 

[Spin Doctor]

This thread has NOTHING TO DO WITH BASS TECHNIQUE.
You should post your music in the Recordings Forum.

He's looking for ways to improve his playing, which probably involves technique. He's not looking for ways to improve his recording.

 

[Whousedtoplay]

He's looking for ways to improve his playing, which probably involves technique. He's not looking for ways to improve his recording.

You are a nice person. You see the world through rose-colored glasses.

 

[Spin Doctor]

You are a nice person. You see the world through rose-colored glasses.

I tend to find that it's a better life option than the opposite...

 

[RunBeerRun]

gnarly.

 

[JSPbassplayer]

Well this devolved quickly. I posted this here as there was another post with a similar question in this sub forum. If it needs to go in recordings then I encourage a moderator to move it but my question was how can I improve or alter my playing as in note choices or timing issues, not whether or not my tone was good or even the songs or other instruments.

 

[JSPbassplayer]

I apologize if it came across that way I'm still trying to figure out how to post appropriately. I do appreciate your input and agree with your last post that mine could come accross as thinly veiled marketing Ploy, and will try to not mispoat in the future