Feedback on new song appreciated.

[MissTheTrain]

Played one of our new songs at a gig the other night. We are thinking about recording it this weekend. Let me know what you think.

 

[oniman7]

Cool song. Another guitar track in the studio might serve it well by thickening it up. Or it may kill the groove. I'd record it. However, as a listener, I find myself expecting the main verse to build up into a stronger chorus and it's killing me. I am a rock fan, maybe you guys are going for more of a Maroon 5 type thing, but otherwise I'd work in a little harder hitting chorus to deliver a hook and add some dynamic flow.

 

[MissTheTrain]

Thanks. Yeah kinda going for the Maroon 5 type thing with a little more reggae flow. Glad you like it.

 

[MissTheTrain]

bump

 

[p-lo]

I like it, sounds a lot like old sublime to me. In particular your singers delivery.

 

[MissTheTrain]

A lot of people say we sound like sublime / Maroon 5 / Chilli Peppers all rolled into one. Our style varies some, depending on the song though I'm not a slap player like Flea. Thanks for the comments.