Hey Guys Check OUt My First Pro Recording

good stuff.
I liked it...it felt just a little bit slow, but apart from that it's great.

 

That was creative playing. I enjoyed your arrangement and how you accompanied your vocals. I agree the tempo seemed to drag a bit, but that was likely your intention.

 

That's good, wish I could do that!

 

Hey Evan the track had some very good moments over all but in a lot of spots it dragged and the timing was off a little(two different aspects of a musical pulse) and your voice shows some interesting promise(and I mean that in the most positive way).

keep doing what you're doing because I hear the potential

p.s.
and focus on the qaulity of your production as well(because it's all connected).

 

Good job!

Intro: A little reverb goes a long way! Banjer's out of tune.

Rest of the tune:
Drums drag a little

Mainly you need some EQ on your voice. Cut the low-mids and boost the highs (small increments) to bring out the presence in your voice. Then it'll sit in the mix like you want it to. Your vocal level is low in spots so it's hard to hear you clearly.

Sounds to me like a lot of that low-mid hump is from the proximity effect of the mic. If you backed off the mic slightly (and stayed there) perhaps you wouldn't have to employ as much of that low-mid freq cut. There are times when it sounds like you're right up on the mic and other times when it drops off almost to nothing. There's nothing wrong with "working" the mic but in the studio I try to keep it to a minimum (1-2 inches). It all depends on the mic, too. The polar pattern and your gain are the main factors here. Experiment and have fun!

Again, good job. Good effort. Keep it coming!

 

Great song, the only thing is that 1)I couldn't understand the words at times ( could you post the lyrics?) and 2) it sounds like it was pieced together, by that I mean it seems like some of the parts aren't in sync sometimes. Rehearse it and record it with a band and it'll be slammin'.

 

I liked it. The only thing that doesn't work is the extreme panning you have going on. Drums & Bass should always be central. You could slightly pan the organ and guitar. The extreme panning disconnects the song from the sum of the parts! Bring it all together. I'd love to hear a remixed version.