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How bad is my playing?

A video doesn't tell the whole story.
If you're confident in your ability and are really interested in the band you're auditioning for, I would insist on a live audition and show them what you can do.
 
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Hi! I think to have a decent rhythm technique, I just thought that playing some lead might impress the band. My favourite bassists are Dominique Lapointe and Mark Michell!

You guys are right. I forgot the rhythmic role of bass, I think I'll need to work on that
Most of my bass playing life Ive spent jamming in projects with just a drummer or jamming to a drum machine and that is where I learned to make bass playing the focal point of the song instead of hanging out on the sideline and it is fantastic to be able to play that way, look at Les Claypool!. If you took Claypools tracks out of Primus how can you imagine the basslines if you never heard Primus before?. My guitarist says if I ever leave the band than the band is finished and that is not because Im the greatest bass player on the block but it is because the music making process heavily surrounds and relies on my creativity. I just may be lucky to have a band that acknowledges my abilities and accepts my direction. Your playing is fine, someone is looking for a bass player like you......and they may not even know it.:thumbsup:
 
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I'm just quoting what was said in the original post.

That's the OP paraphrasing. They may have explained why he's not good enough or just not a good fit. The OP may have just heard "I'm not good enough". I would hope a band of experienced players would take time to let all of the people auditioning know why they did not make the cut, but you may be right.
 
Ha no. That video doesn't win you any band auditions. It's not like he went and nailed Teen Town note for note to a drum track. That would have gotten him somewhere.

We are not saying he is a bad bass player. Just he should work on submitting a proper resume.

I love virtuoso bass music, honestly. But I will say this. All the great bassists groove, even when they're playing lead. It's what differentiates great bass soloists from insufferable imitators. If you play bass as a lead, you should be able to both lead and support yourself at the same time. You shouldn't need two tracks of yourself.
Maybe it wasn't the right type of video to send, but it still showed he has talent. I think I can play well and he plays better than I do. I wouldn't let that bands ignorance affect my self esteem. I still say it's their loss.
 
wow you really responded, I love talkbass. I really appreciate your criticism, it helped me understand what my error is: I should focus on rhythm and not on lead! The thing is I always liked to show off a bit, but if I want to be a good bassist I need to understand the role of my instrument, I need to focus on being the low end sound of a band. Thank you guys for your answers! And I'm sorry if my english isn't the best, I'm still learning
 
Matt's post was helpful. Without any context, we don't know what's going on.

I've never heard of Viridian, but now I'll go check em out.

Op should check out some of MDBass's videos over on the Dingwall owners thread. I'd say that's more like what an audition video should look like.

Seems OP has disappeared. We should remember that even constructive, well meaning criticism and suggestions are best served in very small doses.

This was like turning on a fire hydrant for a sip of water.
I didn't disappear, I just have a life! I actually appreciate your criticism and I'll work on my errors, and I'm grateful you didn't insult me but tried to explain what is wrong with my playing! The band is "Between the buried and me" and Viridian is the song name
 
I also asked the band why I'm not good enough for them as some of you suggested to do, they texted me back saying exactly what most of you did: they're looking for someone who can hold the groove, not a lead bassist, I asked if I could send another video this time showing some rhythm, do you guys have any suggestion of some really impressive rhythmic playing? Anything is good except slap because I'm not very good at it
 
It's actually neither freeform or jazz: it's a solo from one of the more prominent prog metal bands around today ;)

But given the way it's presented, no one would know that. I've even spent time listening to that album in the past and didn't recognize it at all. I'm actually a little less impressed because i thought the OP was improvising.
 
They mostly play oldies: Led Zeppelin, ACDC, Pink Floyd, stuff like that. I was thinking about learning Lemon Song from Led Zeppelin, would that be a good way to show them that I have decent skill?

Yes! Learning just about any songs from those groups and videoing that would had likely gotten you a few steps further. You'll also see there is very little(if any) solo playing from the bass on those tracks :)
 
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wow you really responded, I love talkbass. I really appreciate your criticism, it helped me understand what my error is: I should focus on rhythm and not on lead! The thing is I always liked to show off a bit, but if I want to be a good bassist I need to understand the role of my instrument, I need to focus on being the low end sound of a band. Thank you guys for your answers! And I'm sorry if my english isn't the best, I'm still learning

Your English is fine... have you responded yet as to what genre of music you were auditioning for?

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They mostly play oldies: Led Zeppelin, ACDC, Pink Floyd, stuff like that. I was thinking about learning Lemon Song from Led Zeppelin, would that be a good way to show them that I have decent skill?
Asking them for songs directly accomplishes two things. First, it shows you have enough interest in their band to want to learn some of their material. Second, you will have a head start on learning the material if you do get the gig. I'd say go ahead and learn it if you know for sure they are playing it. If not, ask them.
 
They mostly play oldies: Led Zeppelin, ACDC, Pink Floyd, stuff like that. I was thinking about learning Lemon Song from Led Zeppelin, would that be a good way to show them that I have decent skill?
Most Led Zeppelin songs have a strong groove and melody, so that one should be fine. I do wonder, though, if you'll be bored just playing root notes on a lot of these songs. A lot of Pink Floyd doesn't have much bass fireworks going on. Just saying.

Anyway, if you are indeed going to be focusing on bass this time, look back at your video where you're playing the bass notes (the top half of the video). Notice that you're getting way too much clack off the frets and that you're not getting much sustain. Try to get a more sustained tone and get a little more out of held notes.