Judge Me!

[wintremute]

I'm always looking for constructive criticism, so if you have the time, please listen to these songs and let me know what you think.

Things I have some control of:

• The bass lines
• The song structure
• The mix
• The lyrics to Numbers Game

These songs were recorded live in studio, with no going back and cleaning up, punching in, etc. The drummer counted us off and we played. The singer did go back and add backing vocals.

The songs are on YouTube, Spotify, Apple Music, etc: BLACK TIE FUNERAL | Instagram, Facebook | Linktree

If you want to hear my playing with everything else turned down, I have these:

 

[Spidey2112]

Very punchy... Spidey like. Were you playing with a pick? Timing sounded good, as well.

 

[Funky Ghost]

I like it well enough but honestly would have gotten a better feel if everything was mixed for distribution. Can't fault anything. Just would like more of a 'finished" song to inspect and admire

Take this with a grain of salt I'm an old fart

 

[wintremute]

Very punchy... Spidey like. Were you playing with a pick? Timing sounded good, as well.

Thanks for the love. I was playing with fingers on GHS Brite Flats over SD Quarter Pounders.

 

[wintremute]

I like it well enough but honestly would have gotten a better feel if everything was mixed for distribution. Can't fault anything. Just would like more of a 'finished" song to inspect and admire

Take this with a grain of salt I'm an old fart

Yeah, I totally agree that a real recording would have been better. But money and time gave their limitations. Salt grain accepted. Thanks for listening.

 

[wintremute]

If you want to hear my playing with everything else turned down, I have these:

Whoops! Here's the link to ALL the songs with the bass focused: