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LETS WRITE A SONG!

#21
I guess that's it, we have a song.

Maybe wait for Arctic to see this and then propose a basic chord progression for it.

Title ideas anyone?

I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus :
Unwanted Cold Embrace (Snakeman1066)
Tattoos of Elvis on your face (Fenderhutz)
Take your tongue out, I'm kissing you goodbye (atoz)
Mooning life from a window up high.(Spector_Ray)

Verse (4 lines)
You choked on a cork and lost your mind (connor)
If only you hadn't drank that wine (WyrdoBass)
Or ate the monkey made of cheese (cheesemonkey.)
I'd have felt a little more at ease. (Lalabadie)

Chorus

Lost in your time and space (fenderhutz)
Lost in a triathlon race (cheesemonkey)
If it's your time to see the ending line (Lalabadie)
Then it's time to make it mine (fenderhutz)

Chorus
 
#23
Lalabadie said:
I guess that's it, we have a song.

Maybe wait for Arctic to see this and then propose a basic chord progression for it.

Title ideas anyone?

I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus :
Unwanted Cold Embrace (Snakeman1066)
Tattoos of Elvis on your face (Fenderhutz)
Take your tongue out, I'm kissing you goodbye (atoz)
Mooning life from a window up high.(Spector_Ray)

Verse (4 lines)
You choked on a cork and lost your mind (connor)
If only you hadn't drank that wine (WyrdoBass)
Or ate the monkey made of cheese (cheesemonkey.)
I'd have felt a little more at ease. (Lalabadie)

Chorus

Lost in your time and space (fenderhutz)
Lost in a triathlon race (cheesemonkey)
If it's your time to see the ending line (Lalabadie)
Then it's time to make it mine (fenderhutz)

Chorus
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I V III IV in G for verse then switch to I V III IV in Em for chorus
Then I V VI IV in D mixlydian? simple chord progression... title COLD EMBRACE?
 
#40
we could always try recording parts separately and sending them or we each (if we can, i can 'cause I stole my guitar players digi 8 track) record the whole thing ourselves with different ideas going, then upload.

(I would have joined in sooner and tried to help write but I found this after everything had been written, count me in on our 2nd hit single!)
 

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