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LETS WRITE A SONG!

Ok, heres the rules. The song goes verse/chorus/verse/chorus etc. One person starts it, and then the next person must make a sentence that a. makes sense, and b. rhymes. Also, put your name next to your sentence. At the end, (I'll declare the end) we'll put it all together and see what we get.

Ok so I'll start it

Verse: (4 lines)
I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)

Chorus (4 lines)

Verse (4 lines)

Chorus ( 4 lines)

Bridge (4 lines)

Chorus (4 lines)

GO Go Go!:bassist::bassist:
 
Verse: (4 lines)
I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus (4 lines)

Verse (4 lines)

Chorus ( 4 lines)

Bridge (4 lines)

Chorus (4 lines)
 
Quote or copy-paste, for the Internet's sake.

Verse: (4 lines)
I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus (4 lines)
Unwanted Cold Embrace (Snakeman1066)
Tattoos of Elvis on your face (Fenderhutz)
Take your tongue out, I'm kissing you goodbye (atoz)
Mooning life from a window up high.(Spector_Ray)

Verse (4 lines)
You choked on a cork and lost your mind (connor)
If only you hadn't drank that wine (WyrdoBass)
Or ate the monkey made of cheese (cheesemonkey.)
I'd have felt a little more at ease. (Lalabadie)

Chorus ( 4 lines)

Bridge (4 lines)

Chorus (4 lines)
 
So does the chorus repeat or what? (no that's not a line)

If it's the bridge I will add-

Lost in your time and space

Good point.

Verse: (4 lines)
I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus (4 lines)
Unwanted Cold Embrace (Snakeman1066)
Tattoos of Elvis on your face (Fenderhutz)
Take your tongue out, I'm kissing you goodbye (atoz)
Mooning life from a window up high.(Spector_Ray)

Verse (4 lines)
You choked on a cork and lost your mind (connor)
If only you hadn't drank that wine (WyrdoBass)
Or ate the monkey made of cheese (cheesemonkey.)
I'd have felt a little more at ease. (Lalabadie)

Chorus

Bridge (4 lines)
Lost in your time and space (fenderhutz)
Lost in a triathlon race (cheesemonkey)
If it's your time to see the ending line (Lalabadie)

Chorus
 
Good point.

Verse: (4 lines)
I saw you standing in the rain. (xArcticMonkeyx)
With your pants down, crying in pain. (Moocowman)
With your hair so orange (moomoocajoo)
Holding that door-hinge (KeithBMI)

Chorus (4 lines)
Unwanted Cold Embrace (Snakeman1066)
Tattoos of Elvis on your face (Fenderhutz)
Take your tongue out, I'm kissing you goodbye (atoz)
Mooning life from a window up high.(Spector_Ray)

Verse (4 lines)
You choked on a cork and lost your mind (connor)
If only you hadn't drank that wine (WyrdoBass)
Or ate the monkey made of cheese (cheesemonkey.)
I'd have felt a little more at ease. (Lalabadie)

Chorus

Bridge (4 lines)
Lost in your time and space (fenderhutz)
Lost in a triathlon race (cheesemonkey)
If it's your time to see the ending line (Lalabadie)
Please don't run into that big Pine (lowsound)
Chorus


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