Making a song, need help

[NnyLuvsAlex]

I have a nice riff but i need more, i was hopeing that with someones help, we could make a song together

 

[BsB Phobia]

do you have a rough recording of it?

 

[NnyLuvsAlex]

nah, but i can write the tabs, and u can play it and tell me wat u think

Gl--------11--11---11----11---------------------
Dl----9-9----9----9----9------------------------
Al-----------------------------------------------
El-----------------------------------------------

------------l_______l

Gl--------9---9----9-----9----------------------
Dl----9-9----9----9----9------------------------
Al-----------------------------------------------
El-----------------------------------------------

------------l______l

Gl--------9---9----9-----9----------------------
Dl----7-7----7----7----7------------------------
Al-----------------------------------------------
El-----------------------------------------------

------------l______l

Gl--------7---7----7-----7----------------------
Dl----7-7----7----7----7------------------------
Al-----------------------------------------------
El-----------------------------------------------

------------l______l
---------------l
------------these are a little bit faster


its a nice little riff, but i was hopeing to incorporate it into a song

 

[NnyLuvsAlex]

then i just made this part

Gl----8-8-8-8-9-9-9-9-11-11-11-11-9-9-9-9---lol <----repeat
Dl---9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9--9--9--9--9-9-9-9-----lol
Al---------------------------------------------lol
El---------------------------------------------lol