OK. At first I gotta admit I was a bit put off. Seemed like nothing more than a crazy wank fest, and there's some stuff going on in the beginning that I couldn't make heads or tails of.
Listened to the band clip and thought it was frikken awesome.
Went back to the original and on 2nd listen, got it a bit more. Still think it's a wank fest that could probably have a tad more tastefulness going on, BUT I can't deny your talents. Love what you start doing around the 1 minute mark.
Question... why do guys who can do the stuff you can do almost always come out with all guns blazing? It's obvious that the song is more a display of your skills than an artistic expression. Why not start with something more musical, not so showy, and let it kind of erupt into the shredding kind of stuff. Would be more appealing IMO, and less off putting. You know you're going to get tons of comments saying, "this guy is great, but I can only handle 30 seconds of it."
Just trying to be truthful, and possibly helpful. There's no denying you're a great player.