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Original song - feedback wanted

Hey guys and gals,

I want to improve my part writing and playing technique, and this is probably the cleanest recording I have of an original bassline. I'd appreciate any constructive criticism of how the bassline supports the song, my note choices, playing technique, time, etc. Thanks!


If you want to skip the intro, start here ↓ at about 1:00.

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PS - I know I'm not that good of a singer, so no need to point that out :p
 
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