i'm also working on this excerpt for NOI. i start the entire excerpt up-bow so i finish down on the top E. i play open D, 1 on the a string for the F, 2 on B on the d string, 2 on e across on the g string, 4 on the c, 1 on d#, 2 on e, then i play thumb on the g and 2 on the a, then shift up to 1 for the D and end with 3 on the high E. i like getting to 1 on the high D as opposed to 2 because it's easier to nail that wholestep to the E with 1-3 than 2-3. i also use 2-1 for the A-D because at that tempo, i didn't think it was wise to shift from 1 to 1.