Solo Project

It definitely sounds groovy, and I like it. I haven't listened the whole way through all the songs, but if anything, I would recommend just having faith in yourself behind every note, as it sounds like you're unsure of yourself at points, especially in "Journey by the Ocean". Remember, you're not in a competition with anyone, so just relax and play. "Neptune" actually sounds great; I love how you approach the fretless lead parts. I'll listen some more when I have extra time, but awesome so far. Just my humble two cents...

 

+1 to the sounding a little unsure. You gotta sit back and chill a little more. Go with more feeling than thought.

Pretty good tho, keep it up

 

Best damn elevator music i've heard lately

 

This is just my opinion, please do not be upset.

Your off the beat. Your playing seems to lack passion. You seem unsure when you play. Your not locking in with the groove.

It's better to just playing simple 8th notes with fire & passion then to just putter around, which is it what it sounds like to me.


Sorry

 

I think the lack of passion was a thing for me too. The playing had no voice to it.

Also there was too much repetition in a lot of those tunes.

 

You need to work on your timing a little. I also think the comps are just a little bland, especially the last one which never went anywhere.

 

Much better this time around, still a few boo boo's but overall feels more relaxed and tighter with the beat.

When you solo you need to go somewhere with it, not just meander in the same vein. You should have a beginning, climax & end to your solos.

Keep up the progress. You're definitely sounding better

 

added on myspace.....great for 15 years old I must say! Keep at it and u will be a monster. Just make sure you are always still playing in bands and or other musicians that can challenge you and help you with timing. Sitting in ur room doodling with not really make you a better musician.