Granted, I am not a tube guru. However, I have designed Class-A preamps, and low-noise circuits. Tubes and JFETs have the same empirical noise model, so I am not completely out of my element here.
First, I looked at the schematic. It's hard to read because the tubes are all at the top of the page. It might help to re-draw it in left-to-right format using LTSpice (Link Removed, leaving out anything that isn't in the main signal path.
Second, PBG will correct me if I am wrong here, but you can disable successive stages of a tube preamp by effectively grounding each grid with a 100 uF capacitor to ground (in case a grid is biased). This allows you to find out which portion of the circuit is the worst offender. During this process, it would help a lot to actually measure the noise using a freeware spectrum analyzer such as Virtual Analyzer. This lets you narrow down your analysis of the circuit, since there is usually one dominant source.
Don't turn on your speakers during measurement -- why risk blowing them or damaging your hearing. Also, beware lethal high voltages inside the amp, very close to where you are working. General knowledge of safe amp repair practices is essential.
The two main causes of noise in a tube preamp are going to be thermal noise in the resistors and statistical (shot) noise in the plate current of tubes. Assuming modern resistors, the composition of the resistor is a relatively small effect.
An idealistic design process is to have lots of gain in the first stage, so that subsequent stages contribute minimally to the noise picture. This is difficult in a mainstream tube preamp because of insertion losses of passive attenuators and tone networks. For this reason, the worst offender could be anywhere in the circuit.
Good luck. I know that I have not pinpointed the cause, but have only given some ideas of how to search. You can get triode models for LTSpice (Duncan's Amp Pages has them I think), and LTSpice can do a noise analysis. But I have found the results difficult to interpret, and have resorted to a combination of rule-of-thumb theory and measurement.
Here are some quantitative comparisons, using units of nV/rtHz (nanoVolts per square root of Hz): The quietest tube I know of is the 12AX7, which has around 10 nV/rtHz of equivalent input noise (the shot noise in the plate current, divided by the transconductance). A common IC op amp in bass amps is the TL071, at 18 nV/rtHz. Premium audio amps are around 4 to 8 nV/rtHz. Specialized op amps and discrete design can get you below 1 nV/rtHz. Thus there should be no inherent reason why a tube preamp is noisy, but low-noise design may unacceptably increase the complexity of a circuit.