I've done a few EMG installs myself. I will admit that at certain places and certain directions of standing will produce a hum. I can stand in my practice room facing the door, no hum. Turn to the window (90 degrees left), hum.
No matter where I have hum, it always turned out to be environment. Which is frustrating to say the least. I've tested the bass I have the most trouble with: noise is audible when the pre-amp is showing 0db peak (while playing) and when muting the strings (not grounded) I had to turn up to just about gig levels to hear it, but its there.
Using a battery powered amp about 15 minutes up a state park road (nearest electrical device I know of other than the car and amp was about 10 miles away) Not a single bit of noise at any volume. Same amp in the practice room, noise.
I found my source of the electrical noise was actually more than one source. The fridge, the hot water circulator pump, the furnace's water pumps, and most of all the computers in the house. I just started with all the circuit breakers off, except for the practice room, and kept turning them on one at a time till I got noise. I found it even more frustrating when I found that the only things that make noise are critical household things and not something I can turn off all the time.
Solution for me:
My home has a metal roof and siding. I was just joking around with my friend about grounding the whole house. um... yeah.... It didn't do anything (except make my already crappy cell phone signal level drop to nothing). I knew it was stupid when I was doing it.
I re-grounded every piece of electrical equipment in the house to only a slight improvement.
The thing that made the most difference was removing the water pipe-connected ground that goes to my electrical system and replacing it with a real 5 1/2' copper ground rod driven in to the ground and connected to the panel. Also some idiot went to the trouble of grounding the two of three steel beams under the floor (doesn't do anything but hurt)
Not sure if that was it, I believe it was re-grounding the appliances AND the fresh new proper ground. This also had the side benefit of improving the picture quality on my older CRT based TV's.
hfader:
Your solder joints from that far away look ok. But I notice first that your sheilding is grounded off the case of the first pot. Maybe try a star ground off of the jack?
Your ground from the battery goes to the jack, through the 1/4" plug, out the ring, stops and each pot, (through 6 solder joints total unless that is one wire making each hop to the last pot), then to your pickups. (if there is even any measurable resistance between the battery neg and the pin on the pikcup you'll get buzz).
Also you left quite a lot of extra wire that you could shorten and/or ditch the friction connection, soldering the wiring directly to the pickup (I've done this on every EMG equiped bass I have after I decided to keep them in that bass. Just remove each contact from the connector, put it over the proper pin, and solder it on). Be realistic, how often do you swap pickups even with that friction connector there? What choice would you have other than another EMG just like what you took out without soldering anyway?