• TalkBass has been independent since 1998. Add your voice.
    Create a free account to reply to discussions, view embedded media, and browse with fewer display ads.
    Join freeLog in
    Want zero display ads or expanded classifieds tools? Compare plans.

Help me pick my verse riff

Which one?

  • On beat

  • Off beat


Results are only viewable after voting.
Well, voting is pretty close, and the general census is use both. Thanks everyone. I'm gonna throw out the idea of the "on beat" as a lead in hook, and the "off beat" as the main verse next practice. Probably replace the first chorus with it. And back into the second verse. I can mess with the recordings in the meantime, and check it out for myself. Then present it to the guys.
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: badinage
I got a concept down.

I replaced the first chorus with the on beat. Think, everyone hitting it in unison. Me, drums, and keys/horns. And, the synth part is gonna be fixed. Don't worry about it much. It's just a scratch recording anyway. I played these parts in one pass each.

But, I think this is gonna be the winner. At least, in the right direction.

Again, thanks guys.



I'll present this to the guys on Wednesday.
 
Last edited: