Extremely impressive work. I can never make my shielding look so neat on the edges. What is your secret??? Your pickup cavities look soooo clean!
The secret is to cut straight edges when you are dimensioning the tape. Don't use scissors: I use the blade style paper trimmers you find at office supply stores:
This will keep the cut pieces square and straight (it's how I made the bridge jazz pickup pieces so clean along the top edge).
Also, burnishing is critical. I use a sharpened pencil with the graphite point cut off for corners, and the eraser side for large flat areas. You really want to rub down the tape everywhere so it adheres well and lays down flat with the minimum of wrinkles. With conductive adhesive this may be enough but it doesn't hurt to tack solder the pieces together as well.