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Bass is spot on, crisp and it's cool that you did all with voice/ bass/ looper. Me likey but, with a compliment comes a challenge.

All intended to be constructive... I think rather than calling it a 'new single', what you have is some really good foundation tracks to build on.

Listen to Prince's 'Clouds' & 'Sticky Like Glue' for some inspiration or approach on what you might to introduce some variety and dimension. By the time your more happy with it, you'll probably consider re-cutting the main vocal. Based on some of your others I listened to, you can definitely bring more vocal passion to this one.