New song want feedback

[Alexfithero]

I currently released a song awhile back. I want your feedback.
https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/fromafriend/the-burial

 

[bholder]

The harsh vocal stylings simply aren't my taste, but everything else sound great!

 

[C Stone]

Also not a big fan of the Cookie Monster vocal stylings but the track sounds good

 

[Alexfithero]

I agree with some of the vocal style. The lyrics are mine I had a nice demo set up. I could find it and post the demo. Let you guys hear what the idea was and what was recorded. There was a few things I heard that didn't really sound like the demo version. But I am knew to all this. Wasn't sure how I could approach it.

 

[C Stone]

Don’t get me wrong, there are plenty of people who dig low growls or vocal fry…
The demo I listened to was very short but it sounded tight & mix sounds good.

 

[bholder]

Yeah, no worries, just not my cup o' tea. I tolerate very few harsh vocalists well (but Tatiana is a GODDESS!!!!) hehe

 

[Alexfithero]

I have a demo but that part where it says "I made it, I made it through it all" wasnt actually a scream the way it is in the original demo. Hell and a hammer was close to what I had but it is missing something slightly. Came out overall good though. I got another one I'm working on.