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NSJB's Originals Thread - All Critiques Welcome!

Hi everyone,

I'm back again to ask for any critiques on original songs I record for fun in my spare time. I've been trying to sharpen my skills at mixing recently, so I'd really appreciate comments on the mix. Additionally I thought instead of creating a thread every time I want opinions; it would be better to just lump them into one mega thread.

Without further ado,

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Just some notes:
- The brass is electronic sounding, but I choose that deliberately.
- Please forgive any sloppy playing, my guitar playing isn't great and my synth playing could definitely use some work.
- Most of this was done in about 12 hours and sort of improv for some sections. Because of that the flow could be better in some sections.
 

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