Hi everyone, I'm back again to ask for any critiques on original songs I record for fun in my spare time. I've been trying to sharpen my skills at mixing recently, so I'd really appreciate comments on the mix. Additionally I thought instead of creating a thread every time I want opinions; it would be better to just lump them into one mega thread. Without further ado, Just some notes: - The brass is electronic sounding, but I choose that deliberately. - Please forgive any sloppy playing, my guitar playing isn't great and my synth playing could definitely use some work. - Most of this was done in about 12 hours and sort of improv for some sections. Because of that the flow could be better in some sections.