Great Work!
There is a lot of shifting that I don't think serves the music, you could get a lot of mileage out of the d and a strings. What edition are you using? I would recommend checking out Francois Rabbath's and Paul Ellison's editions for great fingering ideas.
Also, your hands and arms don't seem to be relaxed and efficient:
left hand: seems tense. Are you curving your fingers for speed, accuracy? A lot of players who play these let fingers collapse and open and close their hands more, so they can reach more notes from one position. It doesn't seem like the weight of your arm is being used, but seems rather like you are holding your arm up and then trying to push down your fingers one at a time in spite of your arm position. I think your arm can work for you better, and also help you with the intonation once you get a better muscle memory happening.
right hand: the bow seems kind of too floaty, like you also aren't using weight or enough weight. I think you could get a better sound with flat hair and a more steady, faster bow speed with more weight.
musicality: Overall, I liked it. It did speed up near the ends of some phrases and could dance more as other comments said. I think the suggestion about making beat 1 stronger is a good one.
I'll try to post myself playing these soon and would love to get comments from you, lots of great playing.
Thanks also for the explanation of the recording technique, it really looks superb.