I think the better shot in the end is going to be sans lensbaby, which probably isn't as fun but I'm not feeling it in this situation. I think you should come in tighter on the pickups area at a little lower angle with the other props in the background slightly blurred with the shallow DoF.
This is all SO subjective though!
bc
This is true, Brad; the artsy area of photography is very subjective.
When I show people a soft-focus portrait, some say it looks so nice and dreamy, while others say it looks blurry.
I am going to try some shots with my 100mm macro. I just had this thing in my head that I had to use the Lensbaby.
Thanks for the advice.
And thanks to everyone else who commented.
Mike