Dress Shoe Blues

[BluesHonky]

I recently put this 1 together after losing my last lifelong friend.... I did'nt spend enough time on the structure... after all that work I need to restructure it to add some dimension...Played all tracks except the Kick and snare is Alesis and I embellished the drums my Roland electronic set up.... I have a YamahaAW2816 workstation which I record to..... I'm thumpin Bass these days with a southern rock cover band and do the recording thing for fun..... All input is appreciated,,, Thanks in advance.....[Invalid or Expired Link Removed]

 

[Mesmerize-16]

i couldn't really understand the vocals and that took away from the song for me. good work though!