Fretless improv

[Zanzibar Delgado]

What do you guys think? A couple parts (the faster runs) were a bit choppy, and intonation could use some work in higher positions, but I'm pretty satisfied.

All comments/feedbacks is really really appreciated.

 

[monroe55]

That sounded cool to me. But seriously, get a hair cut.

 

[Zanzibar Delgado]

That sounded cool to me. But seriously, get a hair cut.

I don't see how that second part is really relevant, but thanks.

 

[sawgydawg]

It's relevant when it distracts from the music. Had to minimize to listen to it. I had to say I liked it, more so because of the tone. But it had a great intro type feel too it. :-D

 

[Zanzibar Delgado]

It's relevant when it distracts from the music. Had to minimize to listen to it. I had to say I liked it, more so because of the tone. But it had a great intro type feel too it. :-D

Music isn't a visual art. And I'd say a pretty large portion of male musicians have long hair. There's nothing wrong with it.

That being said, thank you for enjoying it.

 

[bass349]

Ok, if you want some constructive criticism, two things kinds jumped out at me - time and language. Maybe working on the faster phrases where the time went a little wonky would be benificial. By language I mean to work on getting some more musical phrases under your fingers - best way to improve this i strongly believe is through transcription. Hope that helps, Good luck!

 

[roccobladr]

sounds like the beginning of home by dream theater

 

[sawgydawg]

Music isn't a visual art. And I'd say a pretty large portion of male musicians have long hair. There's nothing wrong with it.

That being said, thank you for enjoying it.

never say music isn't a visual art to the wrong college student/prof. they will rip you apart with avant garde reflexes.