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songwriting!

This is a song about leaving what's dear to you, whether it's your family, hometown, your comfort zone, whatever- to pursue your dreams. Because you have to find out, and you have to know. And you hope that they'll still be there for you when you return, whether in triumph or defeat. Because what matters is that you tried.


whisper to me
the words that I wanna hear
speak to me softly
let me know you're near
the choice i have to make is like a gun to my head
either way it'll still be something I might regret

cause I
don't want to say goodbye to
everything we've had
and we've shared
so much

but I
cannot stay behind here
my hopes my dreams just keep
telling me
to go

when you're with me
i feel so warm inside
but i need to break free
to face my winter nights
i can't stay here if I don't know what it's like outside
i hope that when I come back you'll be here by my side

I think about you everyday

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LINK:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=VUr08rBocpk

please focus your criticism on the lyrics! I'm a terrible singer and I'm not a guitarist either but I try.
If you like that, you can hear what it sounds like as a band on my band's myspace below in my sig, there's a video with it.

Thanks!

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myspace.com/armchaircritic
myspace.com/visaisahero
 

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