The Haiku Thread

[BassyBill]

Just a naive dream
The impossible concept
Sustainable growth

 

[Jay2U]

A cheap Ibby I play.
I tried many more expensive.
The cheap Ibby will stay!

 

[Funky Ghost]

Fragile petals fall
Winter kissed icy roses
Summers last stand fades

 

[Jay2U]

The profit of profit
Eating someone else's food
Burning mother earth's fuels

 

[BassyBill]

New haiku forms suck.
From whence the poor discipline?
Unintelligence.

 

[Jay2U]

Lack of knowledge I think
Just wanting to write some meaningful lines
Five seven five this one!

 

[BassyBill]

Lack of knowledge I think
Just wanting to write some meaningful lines
Five seven five this one!

Bassists should count well
I think you might want to check
What syllables are

 

[Funky Ghost]

Counting is hard Bill
For some, much more than others
Smooth moderator

 

[Jay2U]

So lack of knowledge.
Five seven five words I thought.
This time it's better.

 

[afzoomie67]

My haiku is off
I like to procrastinate
This is not funny

 

[guitarchaser]

Nearly three in the morning
Alarm set to go off at seven
So I'm cruising TB woohoo!

 

[MakiSupaStar]

Chocolate cupcakes
found abandoned on the ground
They were delicious

 

[BassyBill]

So lack of knowledge.
Five seven five words I thought.
This time it's better.

Now you have it right
Your haiku fu becomes strong
Forum cred is yours

 

[elgecko]

Snow white mountains

Rare as the pink elephant

Winter in SoCal

 

[Jay2U]

Bill, I do thank you.
You taught me clearly how to.
This winter I'll try.

 

[afzoomie67]

Phalex has a quote
Phalex is my signature
Phalex does not rule.

 

[Eric Perry]

Twin islands rising
in a sliding spandex sea
land ho, camel toe

 

[RaniBrandt]

My haikus never work
I just can't figure it out
How many syllables are supposed to go in the last line again?

 

[Funky Ghost]

Twin islands rising
in a sliding spandex sea
land ho, camel toe

You, my good man, win the interwebz.

 

[elgecko]

Tanker truck fire

Damaged freeway overpass

Traffic in SoCal