I think it sounds very good and your fills and phrasing etc make this a very snappy version - like it a lot! (I'd play it probably just like that... if I could!)
Here is Frans Vollink venting some "frustration" during Covid and playing waaaaaay too many notes (note: he doesn't do that on the album version LOL):
Tristan - Trouble (way too many bassnotes lockdown at home version) - YouTube
Here is Frans Vollink venting some "frustration" during Covid and playing waaaaaay too many notes (note: he doesn't do that on the album version LOL):
Tristan - Trouble (way too many bassnotes lockdown at home version) - YouTube
