Got his permission to post an example track. Here's a demo version of a song he calls calloused hands. I'm not sold on a few things, namely the first verse bassline, the second time through the bridge it feels like it needs to drop an octave and get simpler, and the unison line and the end is a cool idea, but I don't think he's quite picked the right notes. The idea is to recut this after we've had some ears on it for a while.
The good, love the lyrics, harmonies, motion, and especially the mellotron flutes. Drums were cut before the song was written just to an acoustic guitar/vocal scratch so I just followed them for the most part, they may change, but I dig them.
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Would love your collective feedback!