This is an example from a 2014, soothing I’ve improved since then but similar lack of feel. Also wasn’t our best performance.
youre certainly worth getting paid, let me say that up front.
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above ALL ... loose the keyboardist's glasses necklace whatever it's called...it creates the schoolmarm image and that is antithetical to anything you wish to project. I know he'll complain but it's essential. I liked his solo.
You played the most generic bass line possible and didn't project any of it, like you are practicing invisibility (which is fine, don't get me wrong) and you didn't seem to play with any of it, just for instance, in the beginning do you have to play every note of the keyboards hook an octave down...he's doing the job, why not take some low end space in the syncopation, then back to the basic part.
I would add effects to the horn players in the solos, bit crusher ringmod/envelope/delay and tell the alto (who I like) to calm down and be dramatic, he's a bit nervous (in the solos)... both horn players nail the parts though with suburb dynamics.
another thing that occurred to me, as vocalist your drummer has allot of responsibility in any song, which uses up "bandwidth" so that seems like that's a bit un-present as well, although it's really good for that guy's brain in the long term to do two things both pertty well! It's probably good you don't change up in that circumstance, (but I couldn't resist) keeping it appropriate of course
Oh I almost forgot-
"It" is the Depth of the beat, and I learned this from one 20 minute jam with Leslie Langston in which she had "It" in buckets (in my home., we were both working for the same interior landscaping co. after her days touring the world) Also from certain New Orleans drummers.