Alright... where do we start... first off get rid of everything in that pic....
Shoes
A) really tall black leather boots that lace up or
B) Overly large shoes (got to get the ladies interested)
Pants
A) Tighter than skin tight black leather pants with a lace zipper
B) Multicolored striped baggy pants w/ suspenders
Shirt
A) Studded Black leather vest (no shirt under it)
B) Plain white button up shirt
Makeup
A) Full white with black "wings" coming from your eyes
B) Full white with a frown drawn over
Wait wait wait... you said metal... I was thinking you were going for clown (no real hatred for Gene... just funny thought =D)
I just fell out of my chair when I read this!!!