I like it. The font and swash have a nice classic look to them. I do hope you can find the font "unworn" since the aging doesn't add to the integrity of the logo. Try myfonts.com. Keep that white outline! It pops the black lettering. The weight looks fine to me.
I have no trouble with the font for "custom basses." Sans serif is a good choice. The only problem with the font is the worn logo against the clean subtitle. The curve in "custom basses" starts a bit too soon though and drops it onto the curve on the headstock. Changing that to a shorter term would get rid of the need to curve it at all!
I too thought the S and O should be tracked (kerned) tighter, but on closer inspection they are where they should be. Connect them and the floating "on" will be taken care of.
I see you've used the natural shortness of the T to fit the curve in ATK to the string holder. At first I thought the logo and swash looked cramped but on living with it for a while it looks fine.
Copyright symbol?
Very nice. Now I have to go look at your basses. Yikes!
--c.
I have no trouble with the font for "custom basses." Sans serif is a good choice. The only problem with the font is the worn logo against the clean subtitle. The curve in "custom basses" starts a bit too soon though and drops it onto the curve on the headstock. Changing that to a shorter term would get rid of the need to curve it at all!
I too thought the S and O should be tracked (kerned) tighter, but on closer inspection they are where they should be. Connect them and the floating "on" will be taken care of.
I see you've used the natural shortness of the T to fit the curve in ATK to the string holder. At first I thought the logo and swash looked cramped but on living with it for a while it looks fine.
Copyright symbol?
Very nice. Now I have to go look at your basses. Yikes!
--c.


